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Sunday, July 12, 2020
A Short Story 'Blind Date"
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Missy Taylor listened as her Laura relived her
dream date with Ryan Davis. She forced a smile,
but inwardly she hated what she was hearing.
Why did Laura always seemed to have
everything good happen to her. She was from a
wealthy family. A doctor father, a lawyer mother,
two brothers who were in college at Harvard,
and she herself was looking to a career in
medical school after they finished junior college
and she went off to Stanford to study pre-med.
She herself wasn’t sure which direction she
wanted to go, and besides, her parents couldn’t
afford an expensive university, so it was the local
university for her anyway. So why choose now.
She still had plenty of time to make that decision.
Yes, it seemed so unfair. Her family struggled to
simply survive, they weren't destitute by any
means, but her father worked hard as a school
teacher, while her mother worked at a factory as
a seamstress. She was an only child, so there
were no other siblings she could confide in to
share her feelings about life.
“So, who’s your date for the Graduation
dance Missy?”
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Laura looked at her. There was a smirk on her
face. She knew she didn’t have a date, and she
wanted to rub her face in that fact. She looked
over at Laura, sitting there, her long black hair
resting totally beautifully on her shoulders. In
Leather slacks, cashmere pink sweater, and knee
high boots. Every boy in school wanted to date
her, and she knew it.
“I’m leaving my options open. Not sure yet who
I want to go with Laura, too many choices.”
She knew she was lying, but she said it anyway
She could see Laura smiling a bit. She knew She
was lying too. Missy often wondered why she put
up with her. They really weren’t friends, not in
the real since of the word. She wasn’t in Laura’s
circle, although she tried desperately to fit in.
Laura seemed to take joy in all the efforts she
made, but still she was an outsider, someone she
would throw a crumb to, now and then, to
appease her efforts.
She looked up just in time to see Mac Mackenzie
walking in there direction. She covered her face
with her hands. He always seemed to follow her
where ever she went. He was the one thorn in
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her flesh, so to speak since grade school, and
now junior college.
“Hey Missy,” he called her name loudly, making
all eyes turn in her direction. She wanted to run
and hide, as Laura started laughing.
“See you later Missy, your boyfriend is coming,”
Then she rushed off, leaving her there with
everyone looking intently at her.
“Hey, glad I ran into you. He sat down on the
bench next to her.
Why was it his hair always seemed to be sticking
up in that afro she so hated. Guys didn’t wear
those anymore, at least not the guys she knew.
And, he dressed like a nerd, with suits, and dress
pants, and those glasses, oh boy!
“Hi Mac, she said forcing a smile, turning her
eyes away from him.
“What do you want?”
“Well, she could hear him clear his throat. I was
wondering if you have a date for the graduation
dance yet?”
Missy looked at him strangely.
“No, why?”
“Maybe we could go together then?”
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“Are you serious, her eyes shot open wide. You
and me. She started to laugh. That’s really
funny Mac. I need a guy to go with.”
“Well, what am I chopped liver?”
Missy had never seem him upset before, until
now. He flashed a hard look at her.
“I’m a guy, or haven’t you noticed. He quickly
picked up his books and walked away swiftly
before she could even answer back.
“Oh honey, you hurt his feelings. Her
mother sat down on her bed beside her after
dinner, for their usual recap of her school day.
Mac is very sensitive, you know that. She smiled
at her daughter. He’s been that way since first
grade. And besides, you know he’s always had a
thing for you.”
“Mother, Missy said quickly. I could never like
Mac....never.”
“Never say never dear,” her mother replied, then
kissed her warmly on the forehead and left the
room. Missy sat up, reached over and opened
her computer. She suddenly had a great idea.
There were numerous sites, dating sites. She
surely could find a guy for the dance on one of
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those. “Let the search begin, she said softly
under her breath...let the search begin!
There were so many dating sites, which to
choose became a problem. She needed to
narrow her search to guys her age, single, and
trustworthy.
Awe, she said with a smile. This one is it. Even
the sites name attracted her attention. “The Man
Of Your Dreams.” She had never seen so many
handsome guys before of all races, and colors.
“You only need one guy, she said softly to
herself...just one.”
After a few looks at photo’s and the video
promo’s they provided she narrowed her search
down to three. One African American, one
Hispanic, and one Caucasian. They were all
between twenty and twenty five. She finally
settled on Marcus Norton the African American.
She scrolled his video again. He was perfect.
Good ratings, letting her know he had been
chosen before, and seemed to be a safe choice
since there were no complaints about him. She
clicked her choice and then filled out her own
personal profile, then clicked upload and bit her
lip as she waited anxiously for a reply. She only
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needed him for this one event, which she
explained in detail. Her eyes looked anxiously at
the screen, then lit up when she saw the reply.
He wanted to chat with her online now. He told
her to click the chat button on the right. In
moments they were chatting. Missy was happy to
see how handsome he was, and that he was a
professional basketball player in Chicago. He
told her more about himself, and complimented
her on her photo. She explained to him that her
hair was really long, but this was the only shot
she had available for now. She told him all
about herself, where she lived, since he would
need her address to pick her up, and gave him
her phone number. It was all set except for one
thing. She needed to transfer three hundred
dollars to a specific account to cover all the
extras.
Exactly what are the extra’s she typed back.
He explained that the extras would include, limo,
flowers, champagne, and fancy dinner at a local
restaurant in Chicago, and cover the hours she
needed him to stay there.
It didn’t sound to bad, she decided and typed by
her okay. She would use her own savings. There
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was just one more thing. He would be unable to
pick her up on that day at her home because of a
basketball game earlier that afternoon. He
would have the limo driver come to her college,
if that was okay. After thinking, she decided it
was, and gave him the college address. He
promised to be there by 7pm, and that she would
recognize him wearing a black tux, brown silk
tie, holding a bunch of red roses just for her.
She wired the money through PayPal. She
closed the computer. There it was all done. She
sighed deeply. She couldn’t wait to see Laura’s
face when she saw her with a handsome man at
the dance. The look alone on Laura’s face was
worth the three hundred she had to invest.
She stretched out on her bed. There was no way
she could tell her folks what she had done. There
were so many predators and dishonest people out
there. They would never agree with what she
had just done. In their eyes it would be stupid
foolish, and extremely dangerous. She would
just have to pretend to be going with someone
they would approve of. And she knew just the
person...Mac Mackenzie
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It was wonderful to share her news with her
childhood friend Ashley. She was the one friend
and only true friend she could trust. It surprised
her when Ashley said it was a terrible idea, and
dangerous.
“I thought I could count on you Ashley.” Missy
looked at her, disappointed.
“You can, but Missy you don’t know this guy.
She sat down on the bed beside her. He could be
a serial killer, or something, and besides he
already got three hundred dollars from you,
what’s next, your life!”
Missy sat up quickly. “I just wanted to have a
date, someone to show off to Laura and her
circle.”
“Have you told your parents about this?”
Ashley looked at her, I’m sure they wouldn’t like
it at all.”
Missy got up and closed her bedroom door.
“Hush, they might hear you.”
Ashley stood up. “I hope they do, and talk some
sense into you. This is utterly foolish Missy.”
“You can’t tell them about this. Missy grabbed
her friends hand. Promise me Ashley, promise
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me...pinky promise.” Ashley agreed, as they
linked their pinkies together.
“But I still say it’s foolish Missy, and I’m really
scared for you.” She threw her arms around
Missy and hugged her tightly.
What had started out as a good idea was now
beginning to sound not so good. But then the
thought of Laura canceled that out quickly. She
had made a decision, she now had a date, and
she was sticking to it no matter what.
What her mother said about Mac was right.
She did need to apologize to him for what she
said. It degraded him a man. And he was a
man, just not her man as everyone thought. It
was always Missy and Mac in grade school, high
school, and now junior college. She was happy
to hear that after junior college he was going off
to Howard University in Washington DC to finish
his education. It was where his father attended.
He would study to become a dentist, like his
father, and upon graduation return and set up
practice with him. It seemed he too knew what
he wanted in life. She stretched out on her bed
thinking. What did she really want to do with
her life?
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The only thing she really loved doing was
writing. She had numerous journals, poems, and
stories. She turned over, and looked up at the
ceiling. What ever it was, time was passing, and
she had to make some choices about her career,
and soon. She was 20 years old and a woman
now. One day soon she would be out of the
house and living on her own. She didn’t have to
tell her parents everything anymore. Her
decisions, were her decisions. She would talk to
her adviser on Monday, about looking into
Journalism, and other creative writing courses.
At least that would be the place to start. She
would talk to Mac later, but for now, she had to
think about a new dress for next Saturday, and
then tell her parents she would be going to the
graduation dance with Mac, when in reality, she
was going with a perfect stranger. Undressing,
she slipped off her clothes, and got into her
pajamas, and crawled into bed smiling to herself
It was all so perfect. What could possibly go
wrong!
Ashley accompanied her to Burlington,
where there was a dress sale going on. As she
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looked through the dresses she became
depressed.
“Laura ‘s probably buying her dress right now at
Macy’s,” she blurted out as she rambled through
the rack.
“Well, you’re not Laura, and these dresses are
gorgeous.” Ashley turned Missy around to face
her.
“You need to get Laura out of your mind right
now, okay? She walked a bit ahead of Missy.
“And besides, I don’t have a date either and I’m
not depressed, well, maybe just a little. She
smiled. I’m going stag...just little old me, all by
myself.”
Missy began to feel guilty. Here she was
complaining, when poor Ashley had no date at
all.
Missy’s face lit up. “I’ve got it!”
“Got what, Ashley turned and walked back to
her. Oh! You’ve finally seen the danger in what
you’re doing and you’ve decided to call the hole
blind date off. Thank God. She reached over
and hugged Missy. I’ve been praying you
would.”
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“No, Missy pushed Ashley away. You should go
with Mac, that would be perfect, then everyone
will be happy, right?”
“No, Ashley said forcefully. Mac’s totally into
you, and no one else. You just can’t see it can
you. She shook her head. Mac’s a total hunk.
Dreamy brown eyes, tall, handsome, athletic
build, great in sports, and as smart s all get out.
All the girls want to date him, but he’s holding
out for you stupid. If you would just open your
eyes you’d see him.”
“You sound like my mother, I think she’d like it if
Mac and I got together too.”
Missy turned away. “Well it’s not going to
happen. Mac’s just a friend, nothing more.”
Ashley thew her hands up in the air. “Totally
blind...totally blind, she muttered as she walked
away”
Once home she rushed Ashley upstairs. She
thought that after she saw the photo of her date,
Marcus Norton, and read his profile, she might
think differently.
Hum.... Ashley muttered. Then another hum, and
silence.
“Well, Missy nudged her with her elbow.
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“See, he’s totally awesome. He’s a basketball
player, and totally gorgeous. And he has no bad
reviews from previous dates. They all say he’s a
real gentleman.
“Well, maybe. Ashley looked at his picture
again. I’m still not sure. He’s to perfect Missy,
to perfect.”
“Missy stretched flat on the bed.
“Yea, just the guy to totally get to Laura.”
Missy watched Ashley shake her head.
“Still not convinced.” Ashley stretched out
beside her. Don’t like the fact that he can’t pick
you up at your home, and that you had to wire
him money. Ashley turned over on her back.
Don’t like the sound of the whole thing.”
“Oh Ashley, you’re so skeptical about
everything.”
Once Ashley was gone she pulled out the
dress she and Ashley finally decided on. It was
red satin, flared a bit, and showed off her nice
figure. Oh, she wasn't shapely like Laura, but
she did look nice once dressed up. Her red
heels would add to the dress just what was
needed to make her look
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pretty. She could hardly wait for next Saturday
to come. She wouldn’t be the bell of the ball,
Laura would be that as always, but she definitely
would fit in with everyone else.
The next day she rehearsed in her mind what she
would say to Mac. She sat at the entrance of the
humanities center waiting for his class to end.
Her mom was right. He was a very sensitive guy.
She and Ashley often saw him crying when
something sad happened, or an animal was hurt.
She remembered how he cried when ET went
home at the end of the movie . Yes, she definitely
owed him an apology. She thought about all
Ashley said about Mac. She was rolling it all
over her mind, when he doors swung open, and
students came rushing out. Then she saw him.
Ashley had accused her of not seeing him. She
blinked, then looked at him as he walked closer,
then strolled by her as if she wasn't there.
“Mac, she yelled, as she hastened her steps to
catch up with him. From behind he looked very
tall, athletic.
“What did I do now?”
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Missy stood face to face with him. He was
handsome. Why she never noticed it before, she
didn't know, but it was a fact she couldn't deny.
“So, what do you want Missy?”
I wanted to apology. She shifted from foot to
foot. I should never have said what I said to you,
I'm sorry, really sorry Mac.
She felt her heart skip a beat when his brown
eyes met hers. It had never done that before.
“Then I'm forgiven?”
He looked at her.
“Yeah, you're forgiven.” He smiled.
She hadn't noticed what a sweet smile he had.
As they walked along the path towards the
English department where they shared a class
together, she realized that Ashley was right. She
hadn't really seen him before. He had always
been just Mac, her childhood friend, who always
seemed to be under foot since grade school. But
he wasn't a boy any longer he was a man now,
who soon would be walking out of her life, and
going away to another University. She regretted
wishing him out of her life. Now she was about
to get her wish after all these years. He would
be leaving in a couple of months, going to
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another University for two whole years. She
pushed back a tear. Two years was a long
time……. It sounded like forever!
Feeling really optimistic about her life,
Missy was on top of the world. Saturday was
one day away. She could hardly wait. Her
mystery man was soon to appear, well not at her
house as she wanted. But, that was probably the
best thing. Her dad would be on him like “white
on rice”, asking all sorts of questions. She
shivered at the thought. How would she explain
him? Her dad and mom knew all the men she
had dated. She frowned. All three of them. But
only Mac brought a smile to their faces whenever
he came by. It had been that way since she could
remember. But that was all about to change, if
things worked. Who knows. She began to
whistle, something she always did when she was
happy. Maybe her date with her mystery man
might turn into something more.
“Misty, her mother’s voice called up to her from
downstairs, forcing her back to reality.
“Mac is here to see you.”
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“Mac, “she groaned in a voice of
disappointment. She had apologized hours
earlier, what did he want now.
“Be right there,” she yelled back, jumping from
the bed. Nothing was going to disperse her
happy mood, not even Mac.
She noticed the look on Mac’s face as she came
down.
“What’s up,” she said casually, looking at him.
“We need to talk.” He grabbed her arm
forcefully’
Missy pulled away when they were out of hearing
distance from the living room, where her parents
were watching television..
“What’s the matter with you Mac, she said angry.
Grabbing me like that?”
“And what’s the matter with you, arranging a
date with an escort service online?
Missy jaw dropped”
“Who told you? She stared at him. It had to be
Ashley. Missy leaned back against the wall. She
promised, she promised she wouldn’t tell.” She
felt hurt.”
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“It’s not an escort service anyway. She retorted.
It’s a dating service, A lot of girls today use
them.”
Mac moved closer.
“Ashley said she promised not to tell your
parents. She didn’t promise not to tell me.”
Feeling really optimistic about her life, Missy
was on top of the world. Saturday was one day
away. She could hardly wait. Her mystery man
was soon to appear, well not at her house as she
wanted. But, that was probably the best thing.
Her dad would be on him like “white on rice”,
asking all sorts of questions. She shivered at the
thought. How would she explain him? Her dad
and mom knew all the men she had dated. She
frowned. All three of them. But only Mac
brought a smile to their faces whenever he came
by. It had been that way since she could
remember. But that was all about to change, if
things worked. Who knows. She began to
whistle, something she always did when she was
happy. Maybe her date with her mystery man
might turn into something more.
“Missy.” her mother’s voice called up to her from
downstairs, forcing her back to reality.
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“Mac is here to see you.”
“Mac, “she groaned in voice of disappointment.
She had apologized hours earlier, what did he
want now.
“Be right there,” she yelled back, jumping from
the bed. Nothing was going to disperse her
happy mood, not even Mac.
She noticed the look on Mac’s face as she came
down.
“What’s up,” she said casually, looking at him.
“We need to talk.” He grabbed her arm
forcefully’
Missy pulled away when they were out of hearing
distance from the living room, where her parents
were watching television..
“What’s the matter with you Mac, she said angry.
Grabbing me like that?”
“And what’s the matter with you, arranging a
date with an escort service online?
Missy jaw dropped”
“Who told you? She stared at him. It had to be
Ashley. Missy leaned back against the wall. She
promised, she promised she wouldn’t tell.” She
felt hurt.”
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“It’s not an escort service anyway. She retorted.
It’s a dating service. A lot of girls today use
them.”
Mac moved closer.
“Ashley said she promised not to tell your
parents. She didn’t promise not to tell me.”
“What were you thinking Missy?”
Mac voice was rising. In a moment her folks
would hear if she didn't stop him.
“Hush. They'll hear you Mac. She pulled him
aside, but it was to late.
“You two okay out there?” Her dad voice asked.
She could hear his footsteps coming closer, and
knew her mom would be close behind him. There
faces peeked around the corner.
“We're fine, just a bit of disagreement on what
Mac should wear when he picks me up for the
dance tomorrow, that's all.”
Missy saw Mac's eyes look at her in shock, as he
watched them walk back into the living room.
“You didn't just make me a part of your deceitful
plan did you. He threw his arms up n the air.
They think I'm taking you to the dance
tomorrow.” He walked around nervously.
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Missy didn't know what to say. She could see the
anger on his face
“I'm sorry, she said walking closer to him.
“I’m not good enough to go to the dance with,
but a total stranger is.”
Missy watched him rush out the door and get
into his dad’s old jeep. Then the sound of rubber
burning on the street. He was mad, more mad
than she’d ever seen him before.
She tried to put what had just happened out of
her mind during dinner. Her folks were so
pleased that Mac was taking her to the dance.
“See, her father said with a deep smile. I knew
one day Mac would show his true feelings for
you honey.”
Missy faked a smile. If they really knew, they
would probably be very disappointed in her, just
like Mac was.
Once back in her room she dialed Ashley’s
number. She would tell her about telling Mac, of
all people her secret.
“You made me promise not to tell your folks,
Ashley said in defense of her actions. You never
said anything about not telling Mac.”
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Missy knew she was right.
“So, how are you going to get Mac to show up at
your house tomorrow, Ashley asked. You said
he’s mad now.”
Missy rolled over, resting her head on her pillow.
“I honestly don’t know. Guess I’ll just have to
make some excuse as to why Mac will have to
meet me at the dance. It’ll all workout, I just
know it will.
On the phone with Ashley she talked optimistic,
but now thinking about the whole situation, she
was becoming worried. She would just have to
dress and tell her folks Mac would meet her there
because of car trouble, or something. She
snapped out the lights and got under the covers,
She would figure it all out tomorrow.
Her mother was so excited helping her to
get ready. Her hair was made smooth and silky
with a flat iron. Missy was happy to have her
mothers help, but felt o guilty knowing she was
living a lie.
“There, her mother smiled as she looked at her.
Mac will be so happy when he looks at you.
You’re beautiful.”
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Missy had to admit she did look nice, but
beautiful, those words were hard to believe. Her
mother loved her, so of course she was beautiful
to her. But she wanted to be beautiful to a guy.
“Thanks mom, she said kissing her, then
following her out the bedroom door, and down
the steps to where her father was standing
waiting to see how she looked.
“Mac’s going to be happy when he see you.” He
hugged her warmly.
“Mom, Missy swallowed hard. About Mac....
before she could finish the door bell rang. Her
father passed them to answer it.
Missy couldn’t believe her eyes. There stood
Mac, his natural was gone and a shiny bald head
was in it’s place. He was dressed in a black suit,
and his black shoes looked newly polished. He
was really a shock for her eyes standing there.
After a short conversation with her parents, they
walked to his dads jeep.
He politely opened the door and she got in, then
walked around and got in the drivers side.
“Don’t worry Missy, he said before starting the
jeep. I’m just going with you to the door, but I’ll
disappear once your date arrives, then pick you
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up when it over so your folks wouldn’t know.” I
wouldn’t want to wreck your evening with your
new guy.”
Missy didn't know how long they sat in the Jeep,
but it was definitely over an hour.
Finally she saw Ashley's figure running towards
them.
“Mac Ashley said surprised, you look really
good.
“Thanks Ash,” he smiled back.
Missy saw Ashley looking around the parking lot
that was full of cars.
“There's no limo Ash, Misty said. He's not
coming, I was just a fool, like you said.
It was all a sham, to get the money.”
Tears began to flow.
“I'm so stupid, and now I'm out $300 dollars as
well.”
“You're not stupid, Max said, reaching over
rubbing her hand, you're just a loving, and
trusting person that's all. You see the best in
people.” He squeezed her hand tightly.
She didn't know how he could speak such sweet
and kind words, when she always treated him
like he was a thorn in her flesh.
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She looked over at him his big brown eyes
looking back at her.
“Well, Ashley said, since you're both here
already you might as well come in.”
She turned and walked back towards the college,
but not before giving Misty a wink of approval.
“So what do we do now, Max said, turning in his
seat facing her.
If you want to go in, I promise to stay clear so
that everyone won't get the wrong idea about
us.”
Missy smile, as she looked at him. He was
trying to say the right thing. Mac was there he
was always there when she needed him. She
could see It clearly now.
Ashley was right. She’d never really looked at
him before. He had qualities any woman would
cherish.
Missy slid over closer to him in the seat.
“And what wrong idea would that be?”
His big brown eyes blinked at her. She could see
he was confused by her reply.
“The idea that were a couple, you know because
I'm always under foot.”
Misty smile and move closer.
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“I think Mac they've been right all along……..
we are.”
She opened the door and got out, walking
towards the college. She could feel him close
behind her.
“What did you just say Missy?”
She was smiling at him in a way she’d never
smiled before. Like a woman smiles at the man
she truly cares about.
Their eyes met and held a long moment. Then
she reached down and slipped her fingers in his.
He looked up happily, smiling
There was nothing else that needed to be said.
They had finally found where they wanted to be...
with each other.
The end
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